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Oh lordy

Toboe3 August 24, 2019 10:05 pm

So this is one of the best and sexiest animations out there in the yaoi universe. I am only disappointed in two things about how it translates to print that were left out.

1. The sex scene left out where he hyperventilated during it and the seme covered his mouth like he did he did in the past as he pounded into him from behind. (It was glorious and hot).

2. The order of things is a bit off and they left off at the very very end that the seme responds saying something about how the ring was not important because it was a fake. Not that the ring isn't real, but that it was to keep himself from being hit on and so on because he wanted to be with the uke. That's why when he finally got the uke, he gladly removed it and gave it to him. It bothers me that they left that out when it's pretty important to the ending. Lol

Altogether though it was a beautiful job. :3

Responses
    Padfooty August 26, 2019 12:26 am

    thank you so much for clarifying it, it makes the ending a lot clearer now!

    Toboe3 August 26, 2019 11:27 pm
    thank you so much for clarifying it, it makes the ending a lot clearer now! Padfooty

    Anytime!!