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I like this story and moved by jake's love to silver. But it was the funny one abt a stupi...

wow February 12, 2014 7:19 pm

I like this story and moved by jake's love to silver. But it was the funny one abt a stupid young girl who was too early abt love and being deceived. It feels too late for vengeance after loosing her father just because her own foolishness and naive. Pathetic..but i'm statisfied with the ending, happy one :)

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    Scean June 3, 2014 11:44 am

    Yea I feel the same......her naivety pissed me off but at the same time i could relate, sometimes we do foolish things for love. I liked her revenge though, I must admit I was on pins and needles the whole time thinking she was gonna be found out by charles..... All in all, a good read

    corali January 19, 2016 5:04 am

    for me the whole time she was stupid and acted to the final the worst stupid way. Because she doesn't have brain she had to have sex with Charles in orther to have a litle revenge on him, and he even treat her worst with sex. In the whole story she doesn't act with cunning and intelligent, she doesn't make a perfect plan to have her revenge, instead of that she have to betrayed herself to have her revenge because her brain don't give to more, and even she almost is raped twice in the whole story.