I ended up rereading this and I don't remember if I posted this comment before but omg. My biggest peeve was the sister. Even now, I'm still completely shocked that she loved her father so much. He didn't even hide that he was a cunt to the MC. I guess I expected something, anything, from her about how her dad treated her brother...something! Like at the funeral when MC says sorry about YOUR father and she goes "our father" it's like she never actually grasped the type of swine the dad was and is trying to put her and MC on the same familial level and is ignorant to the poor treatment of the MC. Just wish she wasn't part of the story. Ok I'm sorry I just wrote a wall of text. I just had to let my feelings out.
I ended up rereading this and I don't remember if I posted this comment before but omg. My biggest peeve was the sister. Even now, I'm still completely shocked that she loved her father so much. He didn't even hide that he was a cunt to the MC. I guess I expected something, anything, from her about how her dad treated her brother...something! Like at the funeral when MC says sorry about YOUR father and she goes "our father" it's like she never actually grasped the type of swine the dad was and is trying to put her and MC on the same familial level and is ignorant to the poor treatment of the MC. Just wish she wasn't part of the story. Ok I'm sorry I just wrote a wall of text. I just had to let my feelings out.