i didnt like how the story was laid out, it feels too rushed. age is not a problem, the love triangle is interesting and i like who she chose..
spoiler -------- so what's wrong then? the son just confessed that he's in love with the girl since they were kids, the father came, the girl dumped the son and confessed to the father,.. what happens next? the girl and the father did it straight after that.. i mean, really?..
then again, a lot here seems to like this one, so dont mind me, read it and see for yourself; although, personally, im not gonna check this out again ^_^
i didnt like how the story was laid out, it feels too rushed.
age is not a problem, the love triangle is interesting and i like who she chose..
spoiler --------
so what's wrong then? the son just confessed that he's in love with the girl since they were kids, the father came, the girl dumped the son and confessed to the father,.. what happens next? the girl and the father did it straight after that.. i mean, really?..
then again, a lot here seems to like this one, so dont mind me, read it and see for yourself; although, personally, im not gonna check this out again ^_^