Remedial writing. The plot, the writing, the character development, the climax and even the sex scenes felt like they were conceived, blocked and written by a child. Or at the very least, a novice. The author has great potential as an illustrator, but needs some serious work on their storytelling skills. Maybe a collaboration with a pro writer would help.
Remedial writing. The plot, the writing, the character development, the climax and even the sex scenes felt like they were conceived, blocked and written by a child. Or at the very least, a novice. The author has great potential as an illustrator, but needs some serious work on their storytelling skills. Maybe a collaboration with a pro writer would help.