Sorry to artist/writer, but this story feels like a house being torn down. You started out with a great concept and pretty art, total structure.... and as it went along it collapsed into chapters that don't match, pieces that are falling down with name tattoo, marriage, that whole "debt thing"...and to top it off, instead of doing anything with the debris, you show a picture of them in wedding outfits, the end?
There are plenty of smutty stories with a good storyline. It's okay if you want to do smut, all for it, but this feels like someone wanted to make a story to go with the sex, but got lazy in the end and said "meh".
Sorry to artist/writer, but this story feels like a house being torn down. You started out with a great concept and pretty art, total structure.... and as it went along it collapsed into chapters that don't match, pieces that are falling down with name tattoo, marriage, that whole "debt thing"...and to top it off, instead of doing anything with the debris, you show a picture of them in wedding outfits, the end?
There are plenty of smutty stories with a good storyline. It's okay if you want to do smut, all for it, but this feels like someone wanted to make a story to go with the sex, but got lazy in the end and said "meh".