And the characters are good too. However, I felt that the story didn't flow smoothly. One heart-touching scene, and suddenly hot hardcore love making. It was as if the author thought that every chapter should have a hot sex scene. Don't get me wrong, I love a good sex scene, but it should have more logic in a story that emphasized the story and its characters.
And the characters are good too. However, I felt that the story didn't flow smoothly. One heart-touching scene, and suddenly hot hardcore love making. It was as if the author thought that every chapter should have a hot sex scene. Don't get me wrong, I love a good sex scene, but it should have more logic in a story that emphasized the story and its characters.