1. The first story was a great setting for the development and I guess for Venir, Beryl and Azeral*. I agree with everyone on the part that Beryl is a shit head that need mental help, like why do you hurt others for your own deed man! Ugh 2. The second was sad, and I agree with most, why'd Venir had to become a f robot as well as his friend as well, like the f is wrong with Beryl's head. But as character development goes I feel everyone is short terms with themselves and to the story. Like for example, go deeper into their psychology would've made this really well done. I'm just heavily disappointed with the short work I guess. I see potential being written off. 3. I don't mind the third story though I'm so disappointed that I didn't get to see the full form of the seme. 4. Do!!!!n't like it so I skipped.
1. The first story was a great setting for the development and I guess for Venir, Beryl and Azeral*. I agree with everyone on the part that Beryl is a shit head that need mental help, like why do you hurt others for your own deed man! Ugh
2. The second was sad, and I agree with most, why'd Venir had to become a f robot as well as his friend as well, like the f is wrong with Beryl's head. But as character development goes I feel everyone is short terms with themselves and to the story. Like for example, go deeper into their psychology would've made this really well done. I'm just heavily disappointed with the short work I guess. I see potential being written off.
3. I don't mind the third story though I'm so disappointed that I didn't get to see the full form of the seme.
4. Do!!!!n't like it so I skipped.