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Story Gap Chp 5 & 6 shows off MAJOR pacing issues

GlamAngel3766 January 12, 2020 2:55 am

Chp 5 ends with confronting a love triangle in a temple, but Chp 6 begins with the actor returning from Hawaii... WTF IS WITH THIS PACING!?! DON'T END A CHAPTER WITH A CLIFF HANGER THEN NOT PICK UP WHERE YOU LEFT OFF THE NEXT CHAPTER! ESPECIALLY WHEN YOU PUT 2 FILLERS BETWEEN THEM!!!

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