The first one was super rushed not hating but judging a bit I guess where is the development. The others were kinda okay but the first wow. I know they knew each other but it seemed more like love at first sight to me and all of a sudden this guy drops a bomb and says basically live with me.(￣∇￣") p.s. the other author's works are great I just feel this work in particular was rushed trying to put in too much in one story in a small amount of ch.
The first one was super rushed not hating but judging a bit I guess where is the development. The others were kinda okay but the first wow. I know they knew each other but it seemed more like love at first sight to me and all of a sudden this guy drops a bomb and says basically live with me.(￣∇￣") p.s. the other author's works are great I just feel this work in particular was rushed trying to put in too much in one story in a small amount of ch.