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Is it just me or is the story kinda poorly written and paced?

Chiaki March 5, 2020 6:29 pm

Or is it just that the chapters are too short, so it seems like the plot is crawling along? And people are complaining about the stupidity of the males, but neglecting to mention Shanna's stupidity. I know she's confused and all, but it seriously hasn't occurred to her that she actually has magical powers? And I'm guessing that her magical powers are out of the ordinary, which is why she's feared and called a witch in this clearly magical world?

And did the idiotic guy lock her up, declaring that she's a witch because she refused to marry him? Or was she locked up from the start and he was just there visiting her? Either way, if she was actually from a prestigious noble house the whole time, why didn't any of her servants go around searching for her or trying to get her out? Why weren't there any servants around when she suddenly went missing in the garden on the grounds of her estate? How was she even imprisoned in the first place when she's a prestigious noble?? WTF?? (╯°Д °)╯╧╧

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