I mean there is some sort of mystery in background that could have been interesting but the story was so rushed, they fell in love so randomly, the MC discovered that his brother was dead so randomly, the other couple was forgotten so randomly... I mean, human emotions were also very dull. You discover your father literally let your brother drink some kind of poison (which made your brother so weak and was the cause of his death) and you are just like "yeah okay but he is my father" ???????? Yes he tried to make ammend by eating the poisoned grapes, but well... I don't think this could be easily forgotten personally. Also you discover your brother's death and you are like "oh, well... that's a pity" I don't think the author displayed very well emotions tbh... ┑(￣Д ￣)┍
I mean there is some sort of mystery in background that could have been interesting but the story was so rushed, they fell in love so randomly, the MC discovered that his brother was dead so randomly, the other couple was forgotten so randomly... I mean, human emotions were also very dull. You discover your father literally let your brother drink some kind of poison (which made your brother so weak and was the cause of his death) and you are just like "yeah okay but he is my father" ???????? Yes he tried to make ammend by eating the poisoned grapes, but well... I don't think this could be easily forgotten personally. Also you discover your brother's death and you are like "oh, well... that's a pity" I don't think the author displayed very well emotions tbh... ┑(￣Д ￣)┍