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Good, but loses its way towards the end

sweetheart-sweettart April 12, 2020 9:11 am

Don’t get me wrong - this is very cute! Art is great, too. But after a handful of chapters the story totally deviates from the “puppy” aspect of things, which is sorta a shame. I’m all down for the uke getting more confident and less innocent over time, and I LOVED that this actually had (mostly) proper consent and communication, but I was into it for the dom/sub aspect of the plot and that’s pretty much abandoned like, immediately. Oh well. Still worth the read!

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