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I liked this to a point, but had trouble getting over the fact that she went out during carnival to lose her virginity to a total stranger. I'm not some puritanical, patriarchal a**hole that thinks unmarried non-virgins are sluts. I'm just saying that she was asking for trouble. Places like that during carnival are a predator's stomping ground. She was REALLY lucky.
Very true
It’s sad, because it’s the same author, but I think overall “Unnoticed and Untouchable” is a better story. This one was rushed, and while the ML wasn’t a complete ass, he was still hard to like. The FL was okay, but Faith was better.