Reading this is quite frustrating since we often envision our heroes strong and smart. Well, the lady in focus is not - cries all the time, acts before she thinks, has no special skills and has no useful fore knowledge (so far) of things that could and would drive the past she desperately aims to change in the present. Personally, I feel like pulling my hair a number of times while reading this since I find her a tad too emotional. She wants to protect the guy she loves but she has no clear strategy how to accomplish her goal. But I guess, that’s how she is, and that makes her character more real... in a way.
I don’t like zay but I want her to succeed. I really feel for the guy for all the trauma and tragedies he had to overcome in his life. So for his sake (and my sanity as well), I hope MC will have an awesome character development arch because honestly, she can use a lot of it. Lol. Seriously, I don’t need a super powered/master of all trades/mega genius heroine to save the day in order to have a good story. It’s more fun to read someone’s journey as they give their all to overcome obstacles, especially their personal weaknesses - like a true ubermensch.
Reading this is quite frustrating since we often envision our heroes strong and smart. Well, the lady in focus is not - cries all the time, acts before she thinks, has no special skills and has no useful fore knowledge (so far) of things that could and would drive the past she desperately aims to change in the present. Personally, I feel like pulling my hair a number of times while reading this since I find her a tad too emotional. She wants to protect the guy she loves but she has no clear strategy how to accomplish her goal. But I guess, that’s how she is, and that makes her character more real... in a way.
I don’t like zay but I want her to succeed. I really feel for the guy for all the trauma and tragedies he had to overcome in his life. So for his sake (and my sanity as well), I hope MC will have an awesome character development arch because honestly, she can use a lot of it. Lol. Seriously, I don’t need a super powered/master of all trades/mega genius heroine to save the day in order to have a good story. It’s more fun to read someone’s journey as they give their all to overcome obstacles, especially their personal weaknesses - like a true ubermensch.