Even if the art isn't good(which it isn't good at all) the author could have at least paced the story properly. It's very poorly written. The thing with the art, however, is the author knows color theory CLEARLY. By chapter 9 you can tell he/she knows what they're doing. But the anatomy is bad. That being said ....the story is just bad and the characters are kind of...poorly done as well. There's room for improvement, but I don't think I'll be reading anything else by this author
Even if the art isn't good(which it isn't good at all) the author could have at least paced the story properly. It's very poorly written. The thing with the art, however, is the author knows color theory CLEARLY. By chapter 9 you can tell he/she knows what they're doing. But the anatomy is bad. That being said ....the story is just bad and the characters are kind of...poorly done as well. There's room for improvement, but I don't think I'll be reading anything else by this author