hm, there's no hole in the plot but theres something that i can add so that it will be more interesting and the readers feel it deeper. our mc's development, i never saw it properly lmao. the adventure... only twice? i wanna see more...
hm, there's no hole in the plot but theres something that i can add so that it will be more interesting and the readers feel it deeper. our mc's development, i never saw it properly lmao. the adventure... only twice? i wanna see more...