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I'm not saying I hate this story because I don't. But...

Sagitter May 24, 2020 8:38 pm

There's something about this story that prevents me from liking this story as much as I should, which is strange because I'm usually a huuuuge sucker for this kind of shoujo/josei reincarnated as a villainess story. Idk if it's the art, or characters, or just the story itself, but if someone could help me put my finger on it, that would be great.

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    Oyaaaa! May 24, 2020 9:30 pm

    It's repetitive. We get the same boring dialogue from the mom, Citation
    Lets do lost of fun things, Ain. Lets have breakfast always together like this Ain. Ain Ain Ahin Ahin..... Citation end.

    Yiss May 24, 2020 10:03 pm

    She repeats "i am her mother, i want to be a mother here, he is so cute, i will take care of him" too often, yep. Saying it and not doing anything to ptove makes her look naive and almost like a second character (no personality).

    I also had high expectations cause i like these kind of stories but not all of them are the stuff i am looking for... pity ╮( ̄▽ ̄)╭

    Eiriku May 25, 2020 9:08 am

    Yeah it's the FL dialogue. They are pretty lacking and it in result makes the story kinda iffy. Don't get me wrong I still love the story and it's plot, it's just her dialogue dragging it down.
    Still can't wait for next update though ε=ε=(ノ≧∇≦)ノ

    Oyaaaa! May 25, 2020 9:53 am

    Honestly I was so fired up for this on the first 5-6 chapters, but then they just overdid it with the same bland dialogues. Dunno, I am still having high hopes for this though :D

    Yiss May 25, 2020 12:48 pm

    Yep, I agree with all of you. Still I will give it a try though, hoping that it changes at some point. I would love to see what happens if she discovers how her child is behaving, but I think the author will make both father and kid change first, so it'll take time ... ┑( ̄Д  ̄)┍

    Eiriku May 26, 2020 8:14 am
    Yep, I agree with all of you. Still I will give it a try though, hoping that it changes at some point. I would love to see what happens if she discovers how her child is behaving, but I think the author will ma... Yiss

    Ooooo I can't wait for when it happens!

    Yiss May 26, 2020 3:30 pm
    Ooooo I can't wait for when it happens! Eiriku

    ε=ε=(ノ≧∇≦)ノ