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1st story

SkipBeat June 6, 2020 2:50 pm

I finished the first story and intend to read the rest. It's romantic and I like stories with this emotional tension, where expressing love is forbidden yet felt by both parties. It's just makes you want to hang on to all the details. I wish the author worked harder on facial expressions. I like it a lot, but it would of been even better if the emotions of longing, supprise or unexpressed love where stronger. The man should of had a confident so that we know what's on his mind, it would of increased the tension, like Shinogu's love for Hatsumi in Hot Gimmick. It's the best friend that makes her further realise his deep deep feelings. (in the last chapters) NB: I only like hot gimmick because of this hidden love from the brother, the rest is just frustrating. But I just skip straight to the part where the brother is involved. :-)

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