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Yeah it's cute, but

Nyxmeow June 6, 2020 5:55 pm

The "plot" is so stupidly irrelevant in the 2nd chapter, there's actually too much of it. Just draw cute outfits on bunny boy and get straight to the fucking, anything else was seemingly completely unnecessary. How exactly is the dude a pervert anyway? He likes... lingerie and sexy outfits? Most vanilla pervert I've ever seen

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    LazyParrot June 6, 2020 11:46 pm

    Didn't he said it? 'When a pervert does what he desires, mostly it becomes a crime'
    Furuya is more of a gentleman than pervert though.
    I guess your kind of pervert is the hardcore make them all cry and junk with drama and angst etc.

    Nyxmeow June 7, 2020 3:26 am
    Didn't he said it? 'When a pervert does what he desires, mostly it becomes a crime'Furuya is more of a gentleman than pervert though.I guess your kind of pervert is the hardcore make them all cry and junk with ... LazyParrot

    Nope nope, what makes you think that? I definitely prefer sex scenes where everyone is happy - or, at the VERY least, comfortable - with what's happening, whatever that specifically is. That's why I said this is cute, and the sex is fine. The plot is far from gripping (or even noticeable) after the first chapter though. As it stands after chapter 2, I suspect that people shouldn't read this expecting an interesting plot.
    And how does angst, drama or douchebag semes have anything to do with what I'm talking about?? In general, pervert = kinky. There are heaps of different ways to be kinky. Liking sexy underwear? Barely even registers on the kink-metre.

    Nyxmeow June 7, 2020 4:09 am

    Just on the slim chance anyone wonders about the difference in tone between my comments... My original comment was at the end of a rollicking good night with friends. After most of a bottle of wine, subtlety isn't my strong suit.

    anono June 7, 2020 10:08 am

    I think because this is intended to be a comedy, so that's why it becomes like, with things that you deemed unnecessary. Maybe it's just not your cup of tea so i adviced to not read further too

    anono June 7, 2020 10:08 am
    I think because this is intended to be a comedy, so that's why it becomes like, with things that you deemed unnecessary. Maybe it's just not your cup of tea so i adviced to not read further too anono

    *like that

    xielian_inlove June 7, 2020 1:26 pm

    agree