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Yeah honestly I think this sucks. It had great potential but the execution wasn't the grea...

Nickles13 July 23, 2020 1:05 am

Yeah honestly I think this sucks. It had great potential but the execution wasn't the greatest.

I like that the MC is devious but the fact that they gave her DID/ split personality kinda ruined it for me since it highlights her naive side that just has me cringing.

The whole guild thing is kinda good but the characters involved aren't really deepened or developed enough for me to care and I'm just lile 'whatever'. They are just painted as greedy and cunning but it's done in such a cliche way that it doesn't work. Like zoe figured it out pretty quick and there is so much revealed by the crappy schemes of every character that it loses the appeal real fast. If they had stretched it out a bit more this could have been real good, but it just seems like the big reveal was just wasted.
Maybe this will be done later but after 54 or so chapters with little development or improvement I'm just going to drop this as its a waste of my time

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