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Not that bad but it's lacking substance.

Airi_Ai July 31, 2020 1:18 am

Mmmm, the story ain't that bad but I think it lacks storyline and substance, everything just ended as something boring (even if there's sm*t), plain and dull.

The ML's situation could have been more explored, I think his story had potential (why did he lost the purpose of his life, why did he drop everything, how on earth a famous mangaka ended up working with a girl like him, etc. etc); same case with her, she's supposed to be the MC with fears and things to work on but she overcome all her problems (which btw I couldn't get to empathize with her) with the magic of someone's d*ck?

Also the way everything started between them was kinda rapy so that ain't nice neither. I don't reccomend this, it needs more work. (︶︿︶)

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