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The ideas was interesting but...

99999 August 2, 2020 3:53 pm

The stories are a bit rushed.

Pls. It's just a criticism and my perspective/opinion

1st story was kinda good if you can clearly see how they fell in love with each other and if the story is not too short, urgghh. BTW, this is the best among the rest.

2nd story was that sorta kind of an idiotic story. This is not how BDSM works. The seme just treated him as a dog and this is what you call slavery. And that cliche like:
"I fell in love with you."
"I fell in love with you, too."
Urggh. And what the f is that 90% sub? (I'm literally laughing here because he kinda take this quiz in Buzzfeed)

3rd story is the worst of all. Like wtf, why did the uke forgave the seme. And why did the seme didn't confess to the uke without raping him? This is not how it works, dude.

And the last collection of the author's kinks are awesome. I hope he/she can write a story about them.

Responses
    99999 August 2, 2020 4:03 pm

    I forgot the teacher x student story. The uke is weird and the seme is somewhat nice. Not a bad story but an average story for me. And still considering their reputation as a teacher and as a student.

    99999 August 2, 2020 4:04 pm

    The title is funny and weird at the same time