The first story was alright but I think it ought to have more depth in it. When Mizutani told his fiancee that he wanted to be a 'normal' father,obviously she suspected him that moment and later,she decided to end it with him. He,on the other hand,was trying to be a normal person but was scared when he's not. He felt for Tamaki but when he finally acknowledged it,Tamaki was indifferent as he thought that Mizutani was still belittling him. But after noticing Mizutani's tears,Tamaki realised that sempai loves him and when he said 'sempai is mine',it's confirmed that all along,he wanted to be together with Mizutani. Not a bad read,just too mild for me. Chp4 and 5 are normal stories,why are they in here??
The first story was alright but I think it ought to have more depth in it. When Mizutani told his fiancee that he wanted to be a 'normal' father,obviously she suspected him that moment and later,she decided to end it with him.
He,on the other hand,was trying to be a normal person but was scared when he's not. He felt for Tamaki but when he finally acknowledged it,Tamaki was indifferent as he thought that Mizutani was still belittling him. But after noticing Mizutani's tears,Tamaki realised that sempai loves him and when he said 'sempai is mine',it's confirmed that all along,he wanted to be together with Mizutani. Not a bad read,just too mild for me.
Chp4 and 5 are normal stories,why are they in here??