ick

Honestly, I read the whole thing to see if it would improve, but until the end i couldn't get into it. Not only did it feel like the character's personalities weren't fleshed out nearly enough, but the entire premise was kinda cringe. The seme literally coerces the uke to have sex with him, threatens to get him fired if he doesn't cater to him, and ignores the uke's blatant dislike of him. The whole thing was ick