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Haiku are only three lines long, with five syllabels in lines one and three and seven in line two, your poem is considered free verse instead, just thought you should know ... no offense intended.
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Haiku are only three lines long, with five syllabels in lines one and three and seven in line two, your poem is considered free verse instead, just thought you should know ... no offense intended.
whalefish at dawn
spreading its wings
the soup is colder than yesterday
entangled chopsticks
k, enjoy the haiku
baibai