The story was good. The black white world is not correct but I think her way of seeing the world depends alot on how she defines good and bad. So it would have been nice to introduce "grey" in order to show her growth in how she sees the world. Still she made progress and had a nice character. She always was firm in unexpected situations and didn't start to waver because of love or shyness. Mr Yim acted also like an adult and was pretty realistic in his actions. No overly affection or jealousy and a calm and collected personality that accepts his own feelings without too much drama. What I didn't like were those many incidents before the actual plot. It's explainable why she got caught in such situations but sometimes it felt too much and too forced. Still the story was very nice so please the author :)
The story was good. The black white world is not correct but I think her way of seeing the world depends alot on how she defines good and bad. So it would have been nice to introduce "grey" in order to show her growth in how she sees the world. Still she made progress and had a nice character. She always was firm in unexpected situations and didn't start to waver because of love or shyness.
Mr Yim acted also like an adult and was pretty realistic in his actions. No overly affection or jealousy and a calm and collected personality that accepts his own feelings without too much drama.
What I didn't like were those many incidents before the actual plot. It's explainable why she got caught in such situations but sometimes it felt too much and too forced.
Still the story was very nice so please the author :)