So. If you want an honest review, here's my version... They say to write about what you k...

So. If you want an honest review, here's my version...

They say to write about what you know. This author has a few knowledge gaps that are strange and sometimes disturbing.

First of all, when you have blood drawn they do not stab you in the finger. They use a vein on the inside of your elbow usually. Instead of a doctor, the author decided to have the ML do this instead, showing that he had a "certificate" however do to the way it was described I do not believe the author knows what a phlebotomist is.

Second, as others have mentioned the lazy opening scene to explain her pregnancy is 100% rape. However, the author chooses to describe this as "losing her first time" even to the point the ML can't figure out why she would possibly avoid him. He unironically wonders if perhaps "losing her first time" gave her trust issues. Throughout, the word rape is never used as if it doesn't exist. Anybody can understand how messed up that is so let's move on.

Third, the child. I do not believe the author has ever met a 3 year old. Either that or the soul of an 80 yr old man is possessing their kid. I understand for plot development the kid is an excellent way to make plot happen, but I find it rather disturbing tbh.

and finally, I wish to say that if you can ignore all of these things this is not a bad story. It is a breezy read and has some face slapping. If you read a lot of Chinese manga, you may in fact find this a pleasantly complex piece with intricate plot in comparison.

I myself will be consciously ignoring the parts that I find either annoying or horrendous and keep reading while keeping these things in mind.