the art is very beautiful. everyone is hot or pretty. the story telling us quite mediocre tho.. the foundation is good, but the execution could be better. the FL isnt exactly weak, but she's not strong either. the ML is also hot and capable at his job. i think the age gap is a bit much, only considering that she's a high school student and he could be a grad student. and tbh, even if she were 18 and he was 28, there would still be a large gap in how developed/experienced their brains are. i thought i was okay with the gap at first, until he was like "your body is my type." i was a bit grossed out, considering he practically raised her.. so yeah, sure, fiction isnt reality, but sometimes you just cant ignore things when you think too logically. personally, i think the author focuses too much on how the characters look and forgets that they need personalities too.
the art is very beautiful. everyone is hot or pretty. the story telling us quite mediocre tho.. the foundation is good, but the execution could be better. the FL isnt exactly weak, but she's not strong either. the ML is also hot and capable at his job. i think the age gap is a bit much, only considering that she's a high school student and he could be a grad student. and tbh, even if she were 18 and he was 28, there would still be a large gap in how developed/experienced their brains are. i thought i was okay with the gap at first, until he was like "your body is my type." i was a bit grossed out, considering he practically raised her.. so yeah, sure, fiction isnt reality, but sometimes you just cant ignore things when you think too logically. personally, i think the author focuses too much on how the characters look and forgets that they need personalities too.