I like this story, honestly i think its good and the characters are not whiny and weak. I think people said this its boring cus it lacks of conflict, but this story is about a whole new gender (not omegaverse) in a oneshot, so i guess its hard and would end more abruptly if the author decides to add more conflict to the plot. However, if there's a spinoff (for the nurse maybe) i believe the story will be better, the author can explore more complex drama regarding relationships cus we already have the main one tht explains the universe.
I like this story, honestly i think its good and the characters are not whiny and weak. I think people said this its boring cus it lacks of conflict, but this story is about a whole new gender (not omegaverse) in a oneshot, so i guess its hard and would end more abruptly if the author decides to add more conflict to the plot. However, if there's a spinoff (for the nurse maybe) i believe the story will be better, the author can explore more complex drama regarding relationships cus we already have the main one tht explains the universe.