I really, really like the story and concept, and the art. But the grammar is pretty annoying. Not quite bad enough that it ruins the whole thing but not good enough to just pass off, either. Edit: it gets better. Its mostly the beginning.
I really, really like the story and concept, and the art. But the grammar is pretty annoying. Not quite bad enough that it ruins the whole thing but not good enough to just pass off, either.
Edit: it gets better. Its mostly the beginning.