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By the way,. u guys should do a right rating, just because u feel mc is so lame or weak or are confused with the story doesn't mean that u can give 1*or 2*. The ideal rating here should be 3* and above considering the beautiful art and really good translation Please don't be a bitch and just do 1* suddenly without proper judgement
(︶︿︶)＝凸
Well the only flow of this story is their lacking of explanation on some parts. Specially how did these worlds are being creater. Is it a planet or just like a a lot of cities bit build with technology and mechanism ( just like the clock planet vibe story ). Also they should explain too what are those monsters they're fighting, basically who are their enemies in general. When did the invasion start and is it like normal planet earth before the invasion. How about the worlds, how many are there and what mission do they need to do in these worlds. Also they didn't mention the detailed description of a gardeners job and if aside from it and the police are there other jobs? How about their Tlulu, how did they create them and that emp, what are these things? Okay so far those are the flow that I have scene in the story that needs clarity. If they can put something like that in a chapter just like of a charater decription in a game then it will clear the confusion in this story for sure. On the other hand, I love the action scenes though I think some pages are missing. I also love the mystery in ML. Very good translation! Okay I'm hoping for more chapters I'll give this 4*!