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This was hard to read lmao

Sufle September 15, 2020 9:36 pm

It's similar to the chinese mangas/manhwas.
Nothing was realistic and both were such badly written characters.
There wasn't a comfortable flow here, it was just a switch between love and hate.
It's not impossible to make it like that in a story but this here really failed at it. Everything was rushed.

The lead was sexually assaulted and yet he still cares for him and then worse falls in love with him?
The guy he likes plays around with others, too and fools around with the lead's sister too?
The lead didn't have an ounce of backbone and let himself be pushed around. That photo and guilt motivated him to let himself be a play thing...
I couldn't take the lead serious at all. He was saying he didn't care what happened but gave in at the next panel right away. There was zero determination or will to get out of this situation.

I also didn't feel any pity for anyone in the end because the lead is so stupid and the other guy is just terrible.

I thought the DNA test would he a main topic but that was completely thrown off in the end...
It would he really really chaotic if they really were related.

Responses
    Saphir October 28, 2020 10:10 pm

    Wisdom, yr analysis is great, I don't why I start reading that so called story