Thanks for taking this on ε=ε=(ノ≧∇≦)ノ So happy to get more chapters of this.. I also got tired of waiting..
I saw two areas with mistakes (if you feel like correcting :P)
+ “Sorry, I’m still a student and doesn’t have much free time” —-> “Sorry, I’m still a student and I don’t have as much free time” (the second part was awkward because it’s almost like he’s talking about being a student in a third person view)
+ “I can’t won’t it, didn’t you win by calculating the judges’ taste and condition?” (It feels like something is missing in the first part,, I’d guess something like this) —-> “I can’t accept this defeat, [...]” —> “I won’t accept this defeat, [...]”
Thanks for taking this on ε=ε=(ノ≧∇≦)ノ
So happy to get more chapters of this.. I also got tired of waiting..
I saw two areas with mistakes (if you feel like correcting :P)
+ “Sorry, I’m still a student and doesn’t have much free time” —-> “Sorry, I’m still a student and I don’t have as much free time” (the second part was awkward because it’s almost like he’s talking about being a student in a third person view)
+ “I can’t won’t it, didn’t you win by calculating the judges’ taste and condition?” (It feels like something is missing in the first part,, I’d guess something like this)
—-> “I can’t accept this defeat, [...]”
—> “I won’t accept this defeat, [...]”