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2nd story was beautiful hear me out

Aranela November 6, 2020 7:23 pm

I found the 1st story pretty cute but honestly felt unfinished.
The 2nd one, yes was incest but imo was profoundly beautiful. (kind of spoilers ahead) In how you think the ML is caging the FL and here comes a knight to break her out and show her the world plus the metaphors with the book in his view. But the tables turn when you find out it was the FL was the one who first clipped the ML's wings she took advantage of his worry after her sickness and blindness, nurturing his feelings making him worry for her only, live for her and abandon his dreams. also twisting the metaphor of the knight to something that he thought was bad to something she welcomes and goes back to. and to those to said she gave up i dont think she did, she chose to go back to her room she told her brother to bring her back in. Her voicing that out and not just being brought back there by her brother speaks volumes to me. but thats just me and idk i really liked this and i felt like talking about it... (●'◡'●)ノ

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