This story is amazing...! I read this in 1 day (a first for me) and I just thought, 'Kazuki... You're so cool...!' But the ending threw me off. I kinda thought it would be more dramatic, because I already guessed that Kazuki would have to die... And then everything was just erased. Just like that. Like Alice in Wonderland. All that cool fighting, making friends with Naoto and Sion, and everything else was just... Gone. I don't really know why, but that kinda pissed me off a little. Other than that, I thought this was a truly beautiful story.
This story is amazing...! I read this in 1 day (a first for me) and I just thought, 'Kazuki... You're so cool...!' But the ending threw me off. I kinda thought it would be more dramatic, because I already guessed that Kazuki would have to die...
And then everything was just erased. Just like that. Like Alice in Wonderland.
All that cool fighting, making friends with Naoto and Sion, and everything else was just...
Gone.
I don't really know why, but that kinda pissed me off a little.
Other than that, I thought this was a truly beautiful story.