I think the author of this did a good job and that they should keep up the hard work!! Keep striving until it is the best it can be, and once it's the best it can be, scream at yourself that you can always improve. Because there is no such thing as the best you can be, you can only keep improving as long as you try. I think this work has a piece of somebody's heart in it. That they worked hard on it. And I'm not the kind of person who blindly complements others, some other people need to comment/critisize/compliment this work. Otherwise, the author... can NEVER improve the outer perspective view of the reader. They have a special view as the author, so their view is obscured of what the readers see. Tell the author what you see. I see a great work. I see great potential. I see heart. I see value. What do you see?
I think the author of this did a good job and that they should keep up the hard work!! Keep striving until it is the best it can be, and once it's the best it can be, scream at yourself that you can always improve. Because there is no such thing as the best you can be, you can only keep improving as long as you try. I think this work has a piece of somebody's heart in it. That they worked hard on it. And I'm not the kind of person who blindly complements others, some other people need to comment/critisize/compliment this work. Otherwise, the author... can NEVER improve the outer perspective view of the reader. They have a special view as the author, so their view is obscured of what the readers see. Tell the author what you see. I see a great work. I see great potential. I see heart. I see value. What do you see?