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Strange structuring

Wdbisl July 15, 2015 5:27 am

This story is just so weirdly put together. I liked it, but at times the story seemed disjointed. I feel like we don't see enough bonding with the characters and things just happen. At times the story seems to jump from one event to another. Also I feel like the story can't decide if it wants to be a serious drama or a breaking the forth wall comedy. It wasn't horrible, but i can see how it can leave some confused.

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