Good concept poor execution. What a disappointment. I had expectations after reading the blurb but from the beginning it was a big let down. Each chapter was rushed. Each scenario, instead of building on it to draw in the readers and draw out the intensity, was stale and boring. I read through all eight chapters and shall now go on and re-write it to showcase the passion, the vengeance, the hatred, and simmering lust that this manga had not. This is truly sad because I liked the concept the mangaka put forth.
Good concept poor execution. What a disappointment. I had expectations after reading the blurb but from the beginning it was a big let down. Each chapter was rushed. Each scenario, instead of building on it to draw in the readers and draw out the intensity, was stale and boring. I read through all eight chapters and shall now go on and re-write it to showcase the passion, the vengeance, the hatred, and simmering lust that this manga had not. This is truly sad because I liked the concept the mangaka put forth.