It's OK but I dislike how she just clings to him and cries, and while she's doing that he's with someone else. Like it would be nice if she said I hate you along the way or the guy would actually chase after her. Or something like the guy showing some love for her pr something. That kiss doesn't look like it has feelings attached to them on his part.For goodness sake the threats he made are sad, never say that to someone.... NEVER!!!(especially someone who likes you) I feel like he's taking advantage of her love for him and somewhat manipulating her.(at like 2 parts in the story you can actually get some hints that he may like her). （￣へ￣）
It's OK but I dislike how she just clings to him and cries, and while she's doing that he's with someone else. Like it would be nice if she said I hate you along the way or the guy would actually chase after her. Or something like the guy showing some love for her pr something. That kiss doesn't look like it has feelings attached to them on his part.For goodness sake the threats he made are sad, never say that to someone.... NEVER!!!(especially someone who likes you) I feel like he's taking advantage of her love for him and somewhat manipulating her.(at like 2 parts in the story you can actually get some hints that he may like her). （￣へ￣）