I have mixed emotions about reading this one, and I really wanted to let it out... At first the story was so sweet and cute but when conflict or misunderstandings arrived, why is the seme always chasing the uke when it was obviously the uke's fault.. I mean, I know you don't want to worry your lover. But damn it's a stalker, its serious business. Of course he wants to protect you. BUT NO!! The uke wants misunderstandings instead (╯°Д °)╯╧╧ Just be honest instead, its your lover, of course he wants to protect and worry..
Also what happened to Zama!?? I know he was there to make the uke jealous, but he was only there for like 3PAGES. Then *poff* gone and never to be seen again.
Another is the stalker.. Yes,I know he was the seme's ex but what happened!? I want atleast a back story .. BUT NO!!!!!!!! HE HAS 1 DIALOGUE ONLY(╯°Д °)╯╧╧
I have mixed emotions about reading this one, and I really wanted to let it out... At first the story was so sweet and cute but when conflict or misunderstandings arrived, why is the seme always chasing the uke when it was obviously the uke's fault.. I mean, I know you don't want to worry your lover. But damn it's a stalker, its serious business. Of course he wants to protect you. BUT NO!! The uke wants misunderstandings instead (╯°Д °)╯╧╧ Just be honest instead, its your lover, of course he wants to protect and worry..
Also what happened to Zama!?? I know he was there to make the uke jealous, but he was only there for like 3PAGES. Then *poff* gone and never to be seen again.
Another is the stalker.. Yes,I know he was the seme's ex but what happened!? I want atleast a back story .. BUT NO!!!!!!!! HE HAS 1 DIALOGUE ONLY(╯°Д °)╯╧╧
LASTLY, Sorry but I DON'T REALLY LIKE THE UKE...