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Wasn't bad, actually cute

Nidka December 15, 2020 12:55 am

So the story was nice, the plot wasn't anything new. We have already seen it on other mangas but still a nice read. The only problem was the transition from ch.5 to ch.5.1, the ending of the previous chapter ended in a whole different note with Uyama actually leaving without a word and the wedding planner appearing to pick up the remaining stuff... Which in the next chapter changed abruptly to Sakyou throwing out the trash and the wedding planner appearing to talk about Uyama and blah blah, helping Sakyou understand his feelings and go find Uyama, who tells him, he is planning to leave for the US.

It was so confusing, there was no connection. They just jumped from a cliffhanger to a whole different climax. (〜 ̄△ ̄)〜

Responses
    kazane December 15, 2020 3:50 am

    uploader mentioned in the beginning of 6.1 as to why there are two versions

    Nidka December 15, 2020 9:01 am
    uploader mentioned in the beginning of 6.1 as to why there are two versions kazane

    Thanks por pointing it out, I actually didn't notice since it's at the end of chapter 6. But I guessed as much that, that was probably the case, either way I think that the abrupt change was uncalled for. My honest opinion. Like I said, I still liked the Story.

    itsme December 15, 2020 11:26 pm

    Agree. It threw me off completely. Even though I know it's meant to be different versions it disrupted the flow of the plot so much I ended up struggling to immerse myself into the plot and their relationship afterwards.

    The 2nd version should've been added after the complete story is told.