I wanted more from the first story. Two chapters weren't nearly enough to flesh out the story. What was shown, was very rushed, and a proper epilouge would have been preferable. Didn't read the second one, it looked unappealing to me since page one. The third one was pretty good. I hate it, when love triangles are drawn out, so it was good, that at least that wasn't a factor for too long. Kissing someone who is still crying after realising that their feelings of love are doomed is pretty scetch, but whatever. The first chapter of this story though, where the girl showed up when MC was out having fun with his love interest on his birthday, did give me an inspiration for a daydream where the obsessive girlfriend breaks apart childhood friends, and I had a grand old time crying over this daydream. I love to torment myself, apparently. But still, I like it when a scene in a story is interesting enough to make me feel some emotion, and thus inspire me.
I wanted more from the first story. Two chapters weren't nearly enough to flesh out the story. What was shown, was very rushed, and a proper epilouge would have been preferable.
Didn't read the second one, it looked unappealing to me since page one.
The third one was pretty good. I hate it, when love triangles are drawn out, so it was good, that at least that wasn't a factor for too long. Kissing someone who is still crying after realising that their feelings of love are doomed is pretty scetch, but whatever. The first chapter of this story though, where the girl showed up when MC was out having fun with his love interest on his birthday, did give me an inspiration for a daydream where the obsessive girlfriend breaks apart childhood friends, and I had a grand old time crying over this daydream. I love to torment myself, apparently. But still, I like it when a scene in a story is interesting enough to make me feel some emotion, and thus inspire me.