... the sense of connection between the protagonists and the feeling of completion with their relationship. The sex scenes felt cold and the ending was ambiguous, since Kazuhito(?) never admits to liking Morishita. The translation seemed a bit too formal, but only for Kazuhito - so it may have been intentional, to highlight how uptight he is. Overall, the story wasn't "bad", per se, but it wouldn't make my re-read list unless there was some kind of continuation done.
... the sense of connection between the protagonists and the feeling of completion with their relationship. The sex scenes felt cold and the ending was ambiguous, since Kazuhito(?) never admits to liking Morishita. The translation seemed a bit too formal, but only for Kazuhito - so it may have been intentional, to highlight how uptight he is. Overall, the story wasn't "bad", per se, but it wouldn't make my re-read list unless there was some kind of continuation done.