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A let down

Hex December 26, 2020 8:06 pm

Art was amazing loved it, however, the plot was too repetitive! Like damn every single time the mc was about to kill his bully so mf just HAD to come and interrupt. Plus like how many times can you level up, I really felt like I was reading Dagon ball or something. Also, there was way too much going on in this story, before one plot of the story could end like three or four more would open up and it felt really sloppy to me. Like sometimes ppl write stories like that and all works out in the end, but this was not the case for this one. As I seen someone already state simple would have really been better!

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