While I do like the setup, in the course of 11 chapters released over 8 long months, the story has progressed almost nowhere. It's... so... slow...! And short! We're basically still in introductions for 2 characters, what you would read in the first chapter or two of a novel.
While I do like the setup, in the course of 11 chapters released over 8 long months, the story has progressed almost nowhere. It's... so... slow...! And short! We're basically still in introductions for 2 characters, what you would read in the first chapter or two of a novel.