The art is this story is glorious. Gorgeous. Top notch. 10/10... But the pacing isn't quite right. The story jumps back and forth in time which breaks the flow. There are a lot of unnecessary flashbacks. I feel like you could reshuffle all the flashbacks into the correct chronological order and make a more cohesive story. I suspect this is entirely the fault of the publication schedule and editorial requests, and not necessarily an artistic choice made by the author.
The art is this story is glorious. Gorgeous. Top notch. 10/10... But the pacing isn't quite right. The story jumps back and forth in time which breaks the flow. There are a lot of unnecessary flashbacks. I feel like you could reshuffle all the flashbacks into the correct chronological order and make a more cohesive story. I suspect this is entirely the fault of the publication schedule and editorial requests, and not necessarily an artistic choice made by the author.