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Force plot?

Katra1212 January 13, 2021 7:29 am

If he's going to blame someone, blame himself first. Would a little call of assurance/worry to his mother hurt? If monsters suddenly pop up, the first thing I'd do is secure my safety, then contact my family. Even if the mother is supposedly far, who knew if the zombie case was spread? And indeed, it's not.

I guess it goes along with the character the author built up. He is clever yet impulsive. A lot of what he decide is largely affected by his feelings. He is a teenager, was a subject to bullying, so it may have contributed to that. He has weak perception of the consequences of his actions, which is realistic in a way, bec in real life, a person seldom follow rationality in drastic events. But still, it's not like he's in bad terms with his mother.

On the other hand, the Father was bitten by the baby on the hospital. That's the origin, then he bit the people in the hospital, that's how it spreads. Then the question is, how did he went back to his neighborhood/near his house? He should've been a zombie to bite another person in the hospital, which means he's not conscious anymore. Why then, is he the only zombie to go out with a clear destination in their movement? Instinct? The zombie's body remembers it has to go home? Nah. Not buying it.

It felt kinda forced. The author used a drastic event to create a stimulus to MC. What's no better than finding out the zombie you're hunting is your father? Even I stan the premise. But the execution of the following events clearly show a lack of logical plot. Not really something to hate, but a nagging annoyance that just stick with me. Maybe I'm just tired of this overused plot. Must every parent die for the child to leave the nest?

Still, the art is really good. It was intense and the story is suspenseful.

P. s. Am I the only one who feels sick of shipping messiah guy and MC? Villainous ML is indeed famous nowadays but I never favor scums. My fujoshi heart would only accept it turning bl if the pairing's ending is tragedy tho.

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