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yea i agree i wouldve loved to see more development of relationship instead of rushing it and suddenly they're so in love to the point of even wanting to die saving the other ┑(￣Д ￣)┍
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yea i agree i wouldve loved to see more development of relationship instead of rushing it and suddenly they're so in love to the point of even wanting to die saving the other ┑(￣Д ￣)┍
It feels way to rushed. Like the someone held a gun to the authors head and told them to write. If it was dragged on out a little more and the relationships had some more time to develop, it would have been easier to understand there feelings and what was going on in the story.
This explanation probably doesn't make sense so hears the sort blunt version. I couldn't understand most of the story.