The art is great, don't get me wrong, but the way their relationship started felt forced and there was no natural flow of romantic development. Insert the meme *well that escalated quickly* The seme just went on assumptions just because the uke was his type. The smexy was nice but I didn't feel invested because of the Seme. He was way too frivolous and if this was rl, I'd say his dick got in too soon.
The art is great, don't get me wrong, but the way their relationship started felt forced and there was no natural flow of romantic development. Insert the meme *well that escalated quickly* The seme just went on assumptions just because the uke was his type. The smexy was nice but I didn't feel invested because of the Seme. He was way too frivolous and if this was rl, I'd say his dick got in too soon.